really not a fan of emi's first time being like that, feels too impersonal/disconnected
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it being grainy and in b&w on top of that is kinda lame, especially with everyone wanting their firsts irl makes this one feel extra weird, you can also barely tell it's unlocked
So Far, I am really liking this. I am having fun with it. The story is mostly well written, and the animation and stills are really really good.
Curious if MissFit knows of or follows the works of Caribdis or Cozy Creator? I see some elements of each in this work.
I really like the way the MC is introduced into his house situation. So tired of MC eventually hooking up with his mom and sisters trope. This way is better, I think.
I love the urban fantasies and this one is working its way to being one of the greats. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
you need to decide if the mc is smart or completely fucking braindead.
the ping ponging back and forth between him being competent one moment and then in the next scene doing something completely retarded is way too much.
I've not finished the current version yet, but the mall and the interrogation are too dumb, and if they are just bad jokes like I assume they are they go on for too long as well, they're too jarring, and out of character from what we'd seen before them
adamantly assuming the clothing store sold drugs just because Lis promised a treat there that wasn't food, if it was just a couple of lines then it would pass as a little "misunderstanding" joke but it went on WAY too long
then the entire opening to the interrogation with so many slaps and over the top aggression, the first one as a nervous mistake was like "wtf lol" kinda thing but then it kept happening and then the fact both mc and claire let each other's names slip despite claire specifically saying not to use each other's names as the only rule to follow seemed like way too much of a dumb mistake for either of them especially claire (I'd also personally say the kelly workout joke dragged on a little, and was out of place cause the scene was finally taking itself a little seriously as a seperate critique)
a slip up doesn't make a character stupid it's continuing to make the same mistake that makes them appear dumb, which is why it's mostly the length of the jokes that messes it up imo, he should've understood sooner with the clothing store, and he should've calmed down after the first slap, as for the name thing I can accept it as getting too relaxed after getting their answers, but I feel like claire atleast should have realised the moment she slipped or something rather than mc having to dream remember it, considering that it seems like she's supposed to be some experienced badass and all
handwaving bad writing just cause it contains porn is lazy, plus if I just wanted porn I'd look up porn not a story driven game that includes porn
those 2 scenes just really bothered me because they weren't funny, went on for way too long, and contradicted the main character is supposed to be smart and the game constantly reminds you he's smarter fir being a lune but he's always an idiot (I'm not a fan of "smart" characters in general cause it's normally just obvious shit that everyone else doesn't realise to stroke the ego of a fictional character)
I'm also tired of the constant interruptions as an ongoing gag since I don't find it funny, it interrupts the flow of the story, and isn't used tactfully. it's clearly just the writer doing whatever they think is funny but atleast it isn't contradicting the story
it also bothers me that everyone just talks casually in public about things that are supposed to be closely guarded secrets, like there is a secret organisation out to kill all lunes that you're trying to hide from but you constantly talk about how you're a lune just walking the street and in restaurants, like tf are you trying to get yourself killed? aren't you supposed to be smart? isn't claire some experienced badass who should know better?
those things are easily ignorable, the two things I complained about originally were bad jokes that felt completely out of place and lasted for way too long to even work as jokes, I should have worded it less aggressively in my first comment but at the time I tabbed out after the interrogation to complain cause this character I'm constantly told is supposed to be smart is doing the dumbest shit I've ever seen, and had it continued like that I would have dropped it, cause again if I just wanted porn I'd look at porn but I come to vns for something with an actual story, and I'm 99% sure people don't make like this just to be porn because that's a whole lot of effort for no reason, sure some are just porn but I don't really get those cause as the creator it's alot more effort than making a comic or video and as a player it's way to involved for fap material so just handwaving it as porn when they're clearly trying for something more than that is a bit inconsiderate to the creator
god it's easy to ramble, that's a lot of words there so...
tl;dr don't be an ass to the creator by saying it's just porn cause the dude is clearly trying to put a good story in there I just feel like they need to learn how to use humour better, cause it was killing the story for me and it's definitely better later in the game
I kind of see where CC is coming from, but I don't think I'm as angry about it. The clothing store thing didn't make sense to me either. But the interrogation I thought was fine. They address saying each other's names in the story. And the slapping kind of made sense just because smart or not, MC is still a kid who learned who he is literally 3 days before, and doesn't have experience yet how to handle such things. It was also addressed in the story that he behaved that way because he saw a lawyer character in a game he and Emi had in common.
Absolutely love this, the story is incredible, the characters are unique and interesting, and the rendering is done very well! This is for sure in my top three, and i can't wait to see more!
I don't commonly write comments but this deserves it...
First of all I wanna start of with praising the minor horror elements shown. First time in a LONG while that I actually jumped from a scare. And not just once, it happened several times. The early dreams, or dare I say nightmares, regarding the girls, were phenomenal.
I've always been interested in the subject of dreams due to the simple fact that I almost always have extremely vivid lucid dreams. I also almost always remember them, and they can span anything from an afternoon, to decades of a life.
I feel that dreams, both in their irregularity but also in their bizarreness, is portrayed really well here.
I do however agree with some other comments I saw with how the story feels a bit too fast of a pace. I'd really have loved to have more time to get to know the girls before telling them about a secret that first of all would take weeks if not months for a normal person to process, but secondly and most importantly is literally a threat to my life if it gets out.
With that said I do like the story otherwise, especially Celeste I think her name was, a fantastic character in my honest opinion.
Now I am only about 9 hours of gameplay in, not sure what is estimated for total playtime for currently so not sure how far in to the story I am, but for reference I just came back from Japan.
I will continue this at a later time as my eyes are a bit too tired to properly read the dialogue anymore after these 9 hours straight.
I like a lot about this game, but the pacing feels like everything is going way too fast. Life-changing secrets are shared with people met that second, and completely outlandish claims are immediately believed. I know it's explained why the LIs immediately trust MC, but it still feels like it's all going way too fast.
Hello Misfit I Like your game and I really like it there so much potential on it Very Fabulous. There are some funny parts are also and it makes me laugh. I will wait for the next update of this and I can't wait I'm looking Forward for it Take care always misfit!
The story character design and animations are top tier I look forward to future updates and continuations to the story. Perfect cliffhanger for the current version.
I have really loved this so far. I hope you keep working on this. Ive enjoyed the humor alot. The claire and her daughters are the absolute highlight of this for me. I love how they bully the MC constantly.
This.......A freaking hidden gem like, good story telling and to humor on this VN is so good. The story is not in shambles and the character design is good especially Fran and Celeste ( Fran kinda remind me of yuno from mirai nikki, And Celeste's design is good, purple haired girls are attractive ) Overall 9/10 Im leaving the 1 point because the action part is too little, but im sure this will be a masterpeice in upcoming updates
Great game, up there with Caribdis stuff for me! My cynical ass feels like it's false hope with all the mentions of MC never letting anyone be hurt though.
This was such a gem to discover, I'm honestly disappointed it's not more widely know and spoken about because I enjoyed every second of the currently available content. Super excited to keep up with this one. :D
Game is fun, though you kinda broke my suspension of disbelief with them going to the police station as civilians to interrogate a suspect of an active investigation.
It just beggars belief that they would actually be allowed to do that. If it's something you want to keep, my tip would be to just make the mum character into an actual cop. It fits what we know of her and would be good characterisation for her, especially if it's brought up earlier.
The scene is still pretty silly in those circumstances, but it makes waaaay more sense that she could leverage her own sway to het MC in there, rather than just sweet talking the desk cop.
Really enjoyed the 0.4 version, MissFit! Looking forward to the public release of 0.5 to see how the story continues. You've got quite an interesting take on the concept here! As soon as I can make it happen, definitly plan to be a supporter. Thank you for your hard work!
Is there a Discord? Would you be interested in a proof reader? I've noticed numerous mistakes that would probably be better to update in bulk rather than individual posts ^^ ``
I haven't caught up to the end of 0.4 just yet, but loving the game so far! Having scenes at the end of the first two chapters felt a bit rushed/out of place, and maybe would have felt better if in a dream rather than irl (that is... if this isn't all one big dream??)
Sometimes the shadows change drastically between talking and listening frames. Everyone is unique and they're all aesthetically pleasing :)
Great work, keep it up!
(reposted, as I wanted to change which account I wanted to post this from. Also very silly of me, I forgot Discord access is sometimes a Patreon perk!)
I love this though, I love writing mistakes they have their own sense of comedic value "pigment of my imagination" sorry just reading through comments. Before downloading. Concept sounds awesome, but then yeah saw this comment made me lol. And to be honest be a dream world pigment of my imagination still weirdly fits. If you kinda think about the idea that thoughts and feelings and emotions are usually associated with colours, like red for angry, or yellow/orange for warmth etc.
And sorry again putting my 2 pence in but yeah gave me a laugh and now I'm downloading 😅
Is it a permanent black screen or is it just a flicker? Are the other animations working? What device are you playing on? I haven't encountered this problem yet. I'll look into it the next time I get a chance.
No need for screenshots, but I need to know if you're playing on your phone or pc/laptop. I probably won't be able to get this fixed until the next update since I just released the latest update. I also don't know if this is an isolated case because I haven't heard anyone had this problem. Sorry for this.
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I love the game! Keep up the good work
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My fave so far is Celeste doing other personalities
I love the story very much and the unique way of telling them. I've played so many generic games that this feels somewhat refreshing.
really not a fan of emi's first time being like that, feels too impersonal/disconnected
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it being grainy and in b&w on top of that is kinda lame, especially with everyone wanting their firsts irl makes this one feel extra weird, you can also barely tell it's unlocked
So Far, I am really liking this. I am having fun with it. The story is mostly well written, and the animation and stills are really really good.
Curious if MissFit knows of or follows the works of Caribdis or Cozy Creator? I see some elements of each in this work.
I really like the way the MC is introduced into his house situation. So tired of MC eventually hooking up with his mom and sisters trope. This way is better, I think.
I love the urban fantasies and this one is working its way to being one of the greats. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Just played the newest update. It really gets weird and interesting! I'm excited for the next one!
you need to decide if the mc is smart or completely fucking braindead.
the ping ponging back and forth between him being competent one moment and then in the next scene doing something completely retarded is way too much.
I've not finished the current version yet, but the mall and the interrogation are too dumb, and if they are just bad jokes like I assume they are they go on for too long as well, they're too jarring, and out of character from what we'd seen before them
I didn’t mean to portray him as dumb. Was there something specific he said or did that gave you that impression?
adamantly assuming the clothing store sold drugs just because Lis promised a treat there that wasn't food, if it was just a couple of lines then it would pass as a little "misunderstanding" joke but it went on WAY too long
then the entire opening to the interrogation with so many slaps and over the top aggression, the first one as a nervous mistake was like "wtf lol" kinda thing but then it kept happening and then the fact both mc and claire let each other's names slip despite claire specifically saying not to use each other's names as the only rule to follow seemed like way too much of a dumb mistake for either of them especially claire (I'd also personally say the kelly workout joke dragged on a little, and was out of place cause the scene was finally taking itself a little seriously as a seperate critique)
a slip up doesn't make a character stupid it's continuing to make the same mistake that makes them appear dumb, which is why it's mostly the length of the jokes that messes it up imo, he should've understood sooner with the clothing store, and he should've calmed down after the first slap, as for the name thing I can accept it as getting too relaxed after getting their answers, but I feel like claire atleast should have realised the moment she slipped or something rather than mc having to dream remember it, considering that it seems like she's supposed to be some experienced badass and all
I've played the game and didn't get those at all. Are you this critical in all porn games you play? That's actually insane
handwaving bad writing just cause it contains porn is lazy, plus if I just wanted porn I'd look up porn not a story driven game that includes porn
those 2 scenes just really bothered me because they weren't funny, went on for way too long, and contradicted the main character is supposed to be smart and the game constantly reminds you he's smarter fir being a lune but he's always an idiot (I'm not a fan of "smart" characters in general cause it's normally just obvious shit that everyone else doesn't realise to stroke the ego of a fictional character)
I'm also tired of the constant interruptions as an ongoing gag since I don't find it funny, it interrupts the flow of the story, and isn't used tactfully. it's clearly just the writer doing whatever they think is funny but atleast it isn't contradicting the story
it also bothers me that everyone just talks casually in public about things that are supposed to be closely guarded secrets, like there is a secret organisation out to kill all lunes that you're trying to hide from but you constantly talk about how you're a lune just walking the street and in restaurants, like tf are you trying to get yourself killed? aren't you supposed to be smart? isn't claire some experienced badass who should know better?
those things are easily ignorable, the two things I complained about originally were bad jokes that felt completely out of place and lasted for way too long to even work as jokes, I should have worded it less aggressively in my first comment but at the time I tabbed out after the interrogation to complain cause this character I'm constantly told is supposed to be smart is doing the dumbest shit I've ever seen, and had it continued like that I would have dropped it, cause again if I just wanted porn I'd look at porn but I come to vns for something with an actual story, and I'm 99% sure people don't make like this just to be porn because that's a whole lot of effort for no reason, sure some are just porn but I don't really get those cause as the creator it's alot more effort than making a comic or video and as a player it's way to involved for fap material so just handwaving it as porn when they're clearly trying for something more than that is a bit inconsiderate to the creator
god it's easy to ramble, that's a lot of words there so...
tl;dr don't be an ass to the creator by saying it's just porn cause the dude is clearly trying to put a good story in there I just feel like they need to learn how to use humour better, cause it was killing the story for me and it's definitely better later in the game
I kind of see where CC is coming from, but I don't think I'm as angry about it. The clothing store thing didn't make sense to me either. But the interrogation I thought was fine. They address saying each other's names in the story. And the slapping kind of made sense just because smart or not, MC is still a kid who learned who he is literally 3 days before, and doesn't have experience yet how to handle such things. It was also addressed in the story that he behaved that way because he saw a lawyer character in a game he and Emi had in common.
Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep them in mind. It's a continuous learning process after all 😁
thanks for the great game! i don't see any updates from discord though
I'll post release updates in discord starting this update 😅
Does game include harem?
0.7 walkthrough?
I'll try to upload it today or tomorrow 🙂
Thanks
is the game still running or is it abandoned ?
- Hopefully not, this game's story is really good
Don't worry, it's not abandoned :)
worry, its abandoned :[
Absolutely love this, the story is incredible, the characters are unique and interesting, and the rendering is done very well! This is for sure in my top three, and i can't wait to see more!
I don't commonly write comments but this deserves it...
First of all I wanna start of with praising the minor horror elements shown. First time in a LONG while that I actually jumped from a scare. And not just once, it happened several times. The early dreams, or dare I say nightmares, regarding the girls, were phenomenal.
I've always been interested in the subject of dreams due to the simple fact that I almost always have extremely vivid lucid dreams. I also almost always remember them, and they can span anything from an afternoon, to decades of a life.
I feel that dreams, both in their irregularity but also in their bizarreness, is portrayed really well here.
I do however agree with some other comments I saw with how the story feels a bit too fast of a pace. I'd really have loved to have more time to get to know the girls before telling them about a secret that first of all would take weeks if not months for a normal person to process, but secondly and most importantly is literally a threat to my life if it gets out.
With that said I do like the story otherwise, especially Celeste I think her name was, a fantastic character in my honest opinion.
Now I am only about 9 hours of gameplay in, not sure what is estimated for total playtime for currently so not sure how far in to the story I am, but for reference I just came back from Japan.
I will continue this at a later time as my eyes are a bit too tired to properly read the dialogue anymore after these 9 hours straight.
I like a lot about this game, but the pacing feels like everything is going way too fast. Life-changing secrets are shared with people met that second, and completely outlandish claims are immediately believed. I know it's explained why the LIs immediately trust MC, but it still feels like it's all going way too fast.
i have these lucid dreams
i cant move a thing
Thinking of you in my bed
You were my everything
Thoughts of a wedding ring
Now I'm just better off dead
I SMELL A STABBY MIKE REFERENCE XD NICE ONE
Hello Misfit I Like your game and I really like it there so much potential on it Very Fabulous. There are some funny parts are also and it makes me laugh. I will wait for the next update of this and I can't wait I'm looking Forward for it Take care always misfit!
The story character design and animations are top tier I look forward to future updates and continuations to the story. Perfect cliffhanger for the current version.
I have really loved this so far. I hope you keep working on this. Ive enjoyed the humor alot. The claire and her daughters are the absolute highlight of this for me. I love how they bully the MC constantly.
This.......A freaking hidden gem like, good story telling and to humor on this VN is so good. The story is not in shambles and the character design is good especially Fran and Celeste ( Fran kinda remind me of yuno from mirai nikki, And Celeste's design is good, purple haired girls are attractive ) Overall 9/10 Im leaving the 1 point because the action part is too little, but im sure this will be a masterpeice in upcoming updates
- Just wish you have a Discord 😢
Great game, up there with Caribdis stuff for me! My cynical ass feels like it's false hope with all the mentions of MC never letting anyone be hurt though.
i think caribdis is a better animator but the storytelling is almost identical with missfit
I wouldn't deny that Caribdis is better 😅
I still have a lot to learn 😁
I think this is so great ,I hope it was continue to update
Gud fire🔥
the game so cool! can't wait for next update. anyway is there any discord server? i can't find it
Thank you! Discord server is only available for patrons at the moment :)
This is a very good game. Looking forward to the next update, I hope it won't take too long!
This was such a gem to discover, I'm honestly disappointed it's not more widely know and spoken about because I enjoyed every second of the currently available content. Super excited to keep up with this one. :D
Game is fun, though you kinda broke my suspension of disbelief with them going to the police station as civilians to interrogate a suspect of an active investigation.
It just beggars belief that they would actually be allowed to do that. If it's something you want to keep, my tip would be to just make the mum character into an actual cop. It fits what we know of her and would be good characterisation for her, especially if it's brought up earlier.
The scene is still pretty silly in those circumstances, but it makes waaaay more sense that she could leverage her own sway to het MC in there, rather than just sweet talking the desk cop.
one of my new favorites. interesting characters with unique personalities, attractive LI's, and great renders
good game, still don't feel choices matter so as checking to see if you want to see lewd scenes or not. I think my favorite character is Celeste
Spoiler alert
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It's "golden kiwi" Lucy will tell you if you win the dream games :)
I have these lucid dreams
Really enjoyed the 0.4 version, MissFit! Looking forward to the public release of 0.5 to see how the story continues. You've got quite an interesting take on the concept here! As soon as I can make it happen, definitly plan to be a supporter. Thank you for your hard work!
Is there a Chinese translation available?
The absence of galleries seems to be a drawback
I'm sorry, there must have been a bug. There should be a gallery.
Fire game with fire story and fire characters hope you keep doing more wit it, was fun asl
Is there a Discord?Would you be interested in a proof reader? I've noticed numerous mistakes that would probably be better to update in bulk rather than individual posts ^^ ``I haven't caught up to the end of 0.4 just yet, but loving the game so far! Having scenes at the end of the first two chapters felt a bit rushed/out of place, and maybe would have felt better if in a dream rather than irl (that is... if this isn't all one big dream??)
Sometimes the shadows change drastically between talking and listening frames. Everyone is unique and they're all aesthetically pleasing :)
Great work, keep it up!
(reposted, as I wanted to change which account I wanted to post this from. Also very silly of me, I forgot Discord access is sometimes a Patreon perk!)
Hey! Thank you for the offer. You can directly reach me in Discord - missft.vn :)
if i talk nothing about story, then no spoiler i guess
the bullet. I am not an expert about guns, but I think this bullet has something wrong(≖_≖ )
Yeah, someone mentioned this to me already. I must admit that I don't know anything about guns, hehe 😅. I'll probably fix this in the next update. 🙂
Really? "Pigment of my imagination"?
Ah sorry about that. I'll correct this right away 😅
I love this though, I love writing mistakes they have their own sense of comedic value "pigment of my imagination" sorry just reading through comments. Before downloading. Concept sounds awesome, but then yeah saw this comment made me lol. And to be honest be a dream world pigment of my imagination still weirdly fits. If you kinda think about the idea that thoughts and feelings and emotions are usually associated with colours, like red for angry, or yellow/orange for warmth etc.
And sorry again putting my 2 pence in but yeah gave me a laugh and now I'm downloading 😅
im geting a black screen on the kissing segment and the spanking seen
Is it a permanent black screen or is it just a flicker? Are the other animations working? What device are you playing on? I haven't encountered this problem yet. I'll look into it the next time I get a chance.
it not permanent its only at the more sexual animations i can take a screen shot of where it starts and ends on the parts if you want
No need for screenshots, but I need to know if you're playing on your phone or pc/laptop. I probably won't be able to get this fixed until the next update since I just released the latest update. I also don't know if this is an isolated case because I haven't heard anyone had this problem. Sorry for this.
Pc it might not be somthing on your end because it happing with other games to