Hello Misfit I Like your game and I really like it there so much potential on it Very Fabulous. There are some funny parts are also and it makes me laugh. I will wait for the next update of this and I can't wait I'm looking Forward for it Take care always misfit!
The story character design and animations are top tier I look forward to future updates and continuations to the story. Perfect cliffhanger for the current version.
I have really loved this so far. I hope you keep working on this. Ive enjoyed the humor alot. The claire and her daughters are the absolute highlight of this for me. I love how they bully the MC constantly.
This.......A freaking hidden gem like, good story telling and to humor on this VN is so good. The story is not in shambles and the character design is good especially Fran and Celeste ( Fran kinda remind me of yuno from mirai nikki, And Celeste's design is good, purple haired girls are attractive ) Overall 9/10 Im leaving the 1 point because the action part is too little, but im sure this will be a masterpeice in upcoming updates
Great game, up there with Caribdis stuff for me! My cynical ass feels like it's false hope with all the mentions of MC never letting anyone be hurt though.
This was such a gem to discover, I'm honestly disappointed it's not more widely know and spoken about because I enjoyed every second of the currently available content. Super excited to keep up with this one. :D
Game is fun, though you kinda broke my suspension of disbelief with them going to the police station as civilians to interrogate a suspect of an active investigation.
It just beggars belief that they would actually be allowed to do that. If it's something you want to keep, my tip would be to just make the mum character into an actual cop. It fits what we know of her and would be good characterisation for her, especially if it's brought up earlier.
The scene is still pretty silly in those circumstances, but it makes waaaay more sense that she could leverage her own sway to het MC in there, rather than just sweet talking the desk cop.
Really enjoyed the 0.4 version, MissFit! Looking forward to the public release of 0.5 to see how the story continues. You've got quite an interesting take on the concept here! As soon as I can make it happen, definitly plan to be a supporter. Thank you for your hard work!
Is there a Discord? Would you be interested in a proof reader? I've noticed numerous mistakes that would probably be better to update in bulk rather than individual posts ^^ ``
I haven't caught up to the end of 0.4 just yet, but loving the game so far! Having scenes at the end of the first two chapters felt a bit rushed/out of place, and maybe would have felt better if in a dream rather than irl (that is... if this isn't all one big dream??)
Sometimes the shadows change drastically between talking and listening frames. Everyone is unique and they're all aesthetically pleasing :)
Great work, keep it up!
(reposted, as I wanted to change which account I wanted to post this from. Also very silly of me, I forgot Discord access is sometimes a Patreon perk!)
I love this though, I love writing mistakes they have their own sense of comedic value "pigment of my imagination" sorry just reading through comments. Before downloading. Concept sounds awesome, but then yeah saw this comment made me lol. And to be honest be a dream world pigment of my imagination still weirdly fits. If you kinda think about the idea that thoughts and feelings and emotions are usually associated with colours, like red for angry, or yellow/orange for warmth etc.
And sorry again putting my 2 pence in but yeah gave me a laugh and now I'm downloading 😅
Is it a permanent black screen or is it just a flicker? Are the other animations working? What device are you playing on? I haven't encountered this problem yet. I'll look into it the next time I get a chance.
No need for screenshots, but I need to know if you're playing on your phone or pc/laptop. I probably won't be able to get this fixed until the next update since I just released the latest update. I also don't know if this is an isolated case because I haven't heard anyone had this problem. Sorry for this.
Such a hidden gem, your music is on point and i love the plot too, hope you will keep going far with this project since it has so much potential. Loving it so far
Story was awesome. but someone please tell me the name of that song after the dream sequence. fucking love it. seriously considering being a patron. maybe on the next update ;)
Yes, I am using the button when I know from the story he is lying. Then he says "Am I lying, do you have proof", then it moves to the next question and loops after the last question. I have tried picking no lies, all lies, 2 lies of various combinations but I can't get out of the loop.
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You only need to catch him lie once in every interrogation segment (there are only two) . If you clicked the objection button thrice and you're wrong, it'll just restart to that segment. Here's the answers: click the interrogation button when the robber say "I was told to show him the ropes. He's just a newcomer" and for the segment, click the button when he say "They put the blinfold back on after. I was only able to remove it after the whole process, when I was already very far away from their place."
Sorry if it's confusing. I plan to make a walkthrough someday :)
I just finished 0.2 and gawddd it was a masterpiece, there was only one small problem tho.
The part when Mr. Bitch introduced the new transfer student Celeste, there was a typo from Max's dialogue he said "i feel like I know here from somewhere" it was supposed to be her not here.
Maybe it could be "I feel live I've seen her somewhere before" or "Wait is that Celeste? Am i imagining things or am i dreaming again?" Cause y'know he saw Celeste in his lucid dream and he should've remembered her?
Or maybe this has something to do with the next update?
I decided to not capitalize it because it is a species name. I'm conflicted on this because you should capitalize race like Asian but not species like human. It's also not an existing word so I can't really search it. I only capitalize it in special cases where it is being talked about. :)
Thank you so much! Update will come every three to four months so I hope you will keep playing :) next updates will have more content, I just want to see people's reaction with this demo release :)
I hope not every animation is like the one in the previews. The moving background, besides being distracting, can be nauseating for some. Please anchor your camera on a fixed POV, not on some body part that's moving.
What a good game, there is no doubt about that, for the first release it is quite well worked. It has good background music, comedy and a very good story. 10/10
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Hello Misfit I Like your game and I really like it there so much potential on it Very Fabulous. There are some funny parts are also and it makes me laugh. I will wait for the next update of this and I can't wait I'm looking Forward for it Take care always misfit!
The story character design and animations are top tier I look forward to future updates and continuations to the story. Perfect cliffhanger for the current version.
I have really loved this so far. I hope you keep working on this. Ive enjoyed the humor alot. The claire and her daughters are the absolute highlight of this for me. I love how they bully the MC constantly.
This.......A freaking hidden gem like, good story telling and to humor on this VN is so good. The story is not in shambles and the character design is good especially Fran and Celeste ( Fran kinda remind me of yuno from mirai nikki, And Celeste's design is good, purple haired girls are attractive ) Overall 9/10 Im leaving the 1 point because the action part is too little, but im sure this will be a masterpeice in upcoming updates
- Just wish you have a Discord 😢
Great game, up there with Caribdis stuff for me! My cynical ass feels like it's false hope with all the mentions of MC never letting anyone be hurt though.
I think this is so great ,I hope it was continue to update
Gud fire🔥
the game so cool! can't wait for next update. anyway is there any discord server? i can't find it
Thank you! Discord server is only available for patrons at the moment :)
This is a very good game. Looking forward to the next update, I hope it won't take too long!
This was such a gem to discover, I'm honestly disappointed it's not more widely know and spoken about because I enjoyed every second of the currently available content. Super excited to keep up with this one. :D
Game is fun, though you kinda broke my suspension of disbelief with them going to the police station as civilians to interrogate a suspect of an active investigation.
It just beggars belief that they would actually be allowed to do that. If it's something you want to keep, my tip would be to just make the mum character into an actual cop. It fits what we know of her and would be good characterisation for her, especially if it's brought up earlier.
The scene is still pretty silly in those circumstances, but it makes waaaay more sense that she could leverage her own sway to het MC in there, rather than just sweet talking the desk cop.
one of my new favorites. interesting characters with unique personalities, attractive LI's, and great renders
good game, still don't feel choices matter so as checking to see if you want to see lewd scenes or not. I think my favorite character is Celeste
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It's "golden kiwi" Lucy will tell you if you win the dream games :)
I have these lucid dreams
Really enjoyed the 0.4 version, MissFit! Looking forward to the public release of 0.5 to see how the story continues. You've got quite an interesting take on the concept here! As soon as I can make it happen, definitly plan to be a supporter. Thank you for your hard work!
Is there a Chinese translation available?
The absence of galleries seems to be a drawback
I'm sorry, there must have been a bug. There should be a gallery.
Fire game with fire story and fire characters hope you keep doing more wit it, was fun asl
Is there a Discord?Would you be interested in a proof reader? I've noticed numerous mistakes that would probably be better to update in bulk rather than individual posts ^^ ``I haven't caught up to the end of 0.4 just yet, but loving the game so far! Having scenes at the end of the first two chapters felt a bit rushed/out of place, and maybe would have felt better if in a dream rather than irl (that is... if this isn't all one big dream??)
Sometimes the shadows change drastically between talking and listening frames. Everyone is unique and they're all aesthetically pleasing :)
Great work, keep it up!
(reposted, as I wanted to change which account I wanted to post this from. Also very silly of me, I forgot Discord access is sometimes a Patreon perk!)
Hey! Thank you for the offer. You can directly reach me in Discord - missft.vn :)
if i talk nothing about story, then no spoiler i guess
the bullet. I am not an expert about guns, but I think this bullet has something wrong(≖_≖ )
Yeah, someone mentioned this to me already. I must admit that I don't know anything about guns, hehe 😅. I'll probably fix this in the next update. 🙂
Really? "Pigment of my imagination"?
Ah sorry about that. I'll correct this right away 😅
I love this though, I love writing mistakes they have their own sense of comedic value "pigment of my imagination" sorry just reading through comments. Before downloading. Concept sounds awesome, but then yeah saw this comment made me lol. And to be honest be a dream world pigment of my imagination still weirdly fits. If you kinda think about the idea that thoughts and feelings and emotions are usually associated with colours, like red for angry, or yellow/orange for warmth etc.
And sorry again putting my 2 pence in but yeah gave me a laugh and now I'm downloading 😅
im geting a black screen on the kissing segment and the spanking seen
Is it a permanent black screen or is it just a flicker? Are the other animations working? What device are you playing on? I haven't encountered this problem yet. I'll look into it the next time I get a chance.
it not permanent its only at the more sexual animations i can take a screen shot of where it starts and ends on the parts if you want
No need for screenshots, but I need to know if you're playing on your phone or pc/laptop. I probably won't be able to get this fixed until the next update since I just released the latest update. I also don't know if this is an isolated case because I haven't heard anyone had this problem. Sorry for this.
Pc it might not be somthing on your end because it happing with other games to
Yo, Mind if I ask what song was used on Elise's first H scene (after the bank segment) I liked it, pretty catchy
It's "I Will Be Here (Vocal EDM)" by FASSounds :)
Such a hidden gem, your music is on point and i love the plot too, hope you will keep going far with this project since it has so much potential. Loving it so far
Story was awesome. but someone please tell me the name of that song after the dream sequence. fucking love it. seriously considering being a patron. maybe on the next update ;)
For the favorite color is it not golden liie the hint says???
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it's golden kiwi :) the kiwi is included :)
I'm stuck in the prisoner interrogation. It just keeps looping because I think I am missing something. Any help is appreciated.
Are you pressing the objection button on the upper right? Press it when he is lying, it'll only appear when he is talking :)
Yes, I am using the button when I know from the story he is lying. Then he says "Am I lying, do you have proof", then it moves to the next question and loops after the last question. I have tried picking no lies, all lies, 2 lies of various combinations but I can't get out of the loop.
I'm about to post spoilers so read at your own will
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You only need to catch him lie once in every interrogation segment (there are only two) . If you clicked the objection button thrice and you're wrong, it'll just restart to that segment. Here's the answers: click the interrogation button when the robber say "I was told to show him the ropes. He's just a newcomer" and for the segment, click the button when he say "They put the blinfold back on after. I was only able to remove it after the whole process, when I was already very far away from their place."
Sorry if it's confusing. I plan to make a walkthrough someday :)
Thank you for the help.
So another comment about the newest version. (0.2)
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I just finished 0.2 and gawddd it was a masterpiece, there was only one small problem tho.
The part when Mr. Bitch introduced the new transfer student Celeste, there was a typo from Max's dialogue he said "i feel like I know here from somewhere" it was supposed to be her not here.
Maybe it could be "I feel live I've seen her somewhere before" or "Wait is that Celeste? Am i imagining things or am i dreaming again?" Cause y'know he saw Celeste in his lucid dream and he should've remembered her?
Or maybe this has something to do with the next update?
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We need a discord server on god 💯
Thank you for this, I'll look into it and fix it in the next update :)
Also i think there was a dialogue from Lucy when "lune" wasn't capitalized plus it's the first world of the dialogue.
I decided to not capitalize it because it is a species name. I'm conflicted on this because you should capitalize race like Asian but not species like human. It's also not an existing word so I can't really search it. I only capitalize it in special cases where it is being talked about. :)
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I'm playing the game and I'm kinda stuck at the Interrogation part, how do i get pass it? Any hint?
Also i shouldn't have played this at 3am, the part when Claire's eyes turned red it scared the shit outta me 💀
Edit: I've already passed it lol, i just have one question. Do you have a discord server?
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Thank you :) I'm working on the discord server right now. I will update everybody when it's done :)
Nice game! Good graphics+story+characters(especially glasses girl ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), can't wait for the next update!
Good stuff
I love this game nice plot and story and cute girls.
I like it 10/10
Also your oc i think or whatever the one with the twin tail drills is very cute
I really wanted to play more >_< well wish you luck
Thank you so much! Update will come every three to four months so I hope you will keep playing :) next updates will have more content, I just want to see people's reaction with this demo release :)
I'm sorry. I'm not planning to add NTR or a futa character in this game :(
Amazing job, nice plot, nice girls, very well done.
Thank you :) hope you stick around for future updates :)
Found you on F95.
I hope not every animation is like the one in the previews. The moving background, besides being distracting, can be nauseating for some. Please anchor your camera on a fixed POV, not on some body part that's moving.
Ah yes I saw that too, thank you for that, I'll keep that in mind next time.
Hi dev the game looks good!!! I have a question is harem and pregnancy planned??
It will be a harem, yes. Pregnancy is still not confirmed :)
What a good game, there is no doubt about that, for the first release it is quite well worked. It has good background music, comedy and a very good story. 10/10
Thank you so much for the feedback! That meant a lot :)
Oh damn, i didn't know this was released 2 hours ago. Gonna give it a try soon.