Gave up on this one. The A bit in AVN is sorely lacking. The Claire scene in the other town, was HOT AF, and there is thus, some potential there..... but I am not interested in Rich Girl or Kelly.... and HOURS in to the game, they are the only ones I have gotten action with.
I play AVNs for the A bit, or I would I just play VNs... the A is this sometimes good.... Claire was amazing... but the scenes with Glasses Girl and Sporty Spice were... mediocre... and I still aint gotten the full Claire treatment with Blue Hair, Fake Blonde, Pinky or Ghost Girl....and they are the reason to keep playing.
I gave up. This is the first AVN in a LONG LONG time I have GIVEN UP on.
One question is, did they bump into each other's faces? Haha, brother, I think you can really make a guest appearance. It always feels like the protagonist plays a trumpet in someone else's different world.
The story of this game is still good. I like it very much, especially the girl who can communicate with the necromancer. She is very quiet and lovely. The only drawback is that she can't see clearly about sex.
OK I am failing EVERY point in the Interrogation scene. I object to something, wrong, rollback, try the next, wrong.. repeat... over and over and over nothing works.... I have no evidence, because the MC is a little dumb... I know he is meant to be smart... but he is a little dumb... no criticism and I do not think it is a problem... but he goes off halfcocked... and I am literally STUCK.
Kind of upsetting... be nice to have a way to skip the mini-games.
That's what i'm saying. The only way to figured it out is if you read carefully, and if he lied about what he said earlier, and make a different answer thats when you accuse him.
I got through it, but I kind of, tbh, gave up on this game.
It's kinds fun.... and the story is kinda OK.... but it took forever to get the promise made with... Claire.. is it... when you walk in on her bathing... to be made good on HOURS later when you investigate the cursed town... and so far... I have had... fun.. with some random rich girl rammed in to the story, half way through, and Kelly.... but nothing with fake Blonde, Blue Hair, Pinky or Ghost Girl... and tbh, I do not play these games for the VN aspect of an AVN, but the A bit, lots of A bits.... and if I am jumping through hoops to actually get a taste of just how kinky Pinky is.... I am gonna lose interest.
In this case I have.
The puzzles in the game, should DO something. These ones do not, and seem jammed in, at the expense of any of the fun elements.
Yeah. Just a shame, some good potential here. The graphics and aesthetic, the lighting, and ambience, is not as slick as many games which use this engine, like Eternum or Realm Invader, or especially really top notch stuff ... graphically speaking... like New Horizon, City Devil or MayFly.... but the story is sound and there is a lot here... BUT... the Adult content is just under cooked and not really well realised.
My position is if you are making and AVN, make it because the A bit matters and is important to your game. If you are adding Adult/Sexual Content/NSFW etc tags to your game, because YOU HAVE to, not because you WANT TO, because it critical to the game... then just cut that content, have it as shadows on a wall, suggestive imagery, or even just good old Fade To Black.
Sadly, whilst the scene with Claire was hot AF, almost all other scenes are meh, and not really necessary to the story. Claires one could argue, was, because perhaps crossing that line, and bonding that way, sealing the deal re the sexual and romantic energy, however taboo, between you, could be seen as critical to her revealing who she actually is and who she works for, and why she is on your side. All other adult scenes? Not really. At least not to the extent some other moment of bonding between the MC and his would be harem could not have sufficed as replacement. Kissing. Embraces. A FTB scene. Truth told, even Claire's scene could have been that way.
If the Adult element of your AVN is not CORE to your AVN, then just dump it and make it a VN.
If it is... DO NOT MAKE US GRIND for it, and do not make is fleeting... make it HARDCORE pornographic AF, lean in to it, make it delve deep in taboos, and fetishes, and really be glutton in how you gorge on making that content.
Otherwise, you wind up here, with people giving up on your game, despite the other great elements.
none of the download work. gdrive said that it is exceeded quota, and same for mega even after I waited for hours. Can you add a direct download link without external? Or please add another way to download like mediafire or something else.
idk if anyone else is having issues with the google doc one but it wont let me download and im no able to get a paid subscription o mega to download it there lol
Heyo mate. Please consider getting a native English speaker to proofread your work. There are so many grammatical and syntax mistakes that it's actually distracting.
Such a great story and characters. My only real issue is the complete incompetence of the villains which takes away from the stakes a bit. Its silly and funny, but the silly should be kept to the dreams as all dreams are ludicrous. Lets just say it was a bit of a tone shift. However the tone is set so we are here for the ride
An organization called Collective Shout has sent a petition to Mastercard, Visa, and other credit organizations to have games like these banned, and Mastercard complied, holding Itch.io and Steam hostage, forcing them to comply as well.
I like this game. The main premise is interesting and game itself is very funny, especially many interactions with Kelly, she reminds me that guy from Firefly. The cons for me personally are too much porn logic, and not enough romance and affection. The women often just let you fuck them just like that, I prefer a more natural and romantic buildup of relationships, and I like when VNs shows characters in love showing random acts of affection towards each other like kisses, holding hands, hugging etc. and not just "yeah lets go fuck". For me, the game is 4,5/5 so far
I'm only making the English one. I've seen some translated versions through screenshots so I know they exist, but I'm currently not involved with their work.
Hey there, I got a question. I had the previous version installed through the itch.io launcher. But when I tried to update it the game wouldn't update. Then I look further and found out that I can only download it directly to my PC instead of through the launcher. Why was this changed?
Is this about the external links? itch.io only allows a specific file size and since the game size is getting bigger with every update, it came to a point that I should give external links now. I asked itch.io support to extend my file size limit and I already reached that too. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Yes, that what I was wondering about. Thank you very much for clarifying the situation. I'll download the latest version then. It's all right, and keep up the good work.
hey fit, not sure if ur a group or a solo dev, but i see a lot of negative comments, and i just wanna say porn aside, i love the game. I love the references here n there and the weirdly funny punchlines. if nobody else is happy just know that im glad u made this. thank you :)
Hey! I'm a solo dev :) What you said means a lot :) Negative comments hurt, but I try to improve from them. I also know that my game is enjoyed by a lot more people so that keeps me going :)
When I play games like this, I always expect them to be bad at the early parts then decent/good at the later parts. This game doesn't even have a bad early part and it keeps getting good! I'm invested in the story already. The LIs are very unique to each other, which I love! Other harem games just have similar looking girls, I can see the effort in making the girls in this one. My only gripe is that some male models look dumb lol. It's still a 5 stars for me.
At the beginning, I was getting this very cheap effort vibe from the novel, with all the misspelling and weird everything, but I gotta say that the characters each came into their roles, and I ended up enjoying this quite a bit. I feel like I was watching the dev start out with a goofy project but really hone in on writing and the plot. The animations were solid, the ones we did get.
My biggest criticism is the adult scenes. They're usually pretty short and only one or two positions, and I don't think they're transitioned well. It's really abrupt when it happens and when it ends.
I plan to come back, cause I'm really into the plot now, but I would love to see a bit more polish too.
really not a fan of emi's first time being like that, feels too impersonal/disconnected
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it being grainy and in b&w on top of that is kinda lame, especially with everyone wanting their firsts irl makes this one feel extra weird, you can also barely tell it's unlocked
So Far, I am really liking this. I am having fun with it. The story is mostly well written, and the animation and stills are really really good.
Curious if MissFit knows of or follows the works of Caribdis or Cozy Creator? I see some elements of each in this work.
I really like the way the MC is introduced into his house situation. So tired of MC eventually hooking up with his mom and sisters trope. This way is better, I think.
I love the urban fantasies and this one is working its way to being one of the greats. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
you need to decide if the mc is smart or completely fucking braindead.
the ping ponging back and forth between him being competent one moment and then in the next scene doing something completely retarded is way too much.
I've not finished the current version yet, but the mall and the interrogation are too dumb, and if they are just bad jokes like I assume they are they go on for too long as well, they're too jarring, and out of character from what we'd seen before them
adamantly assuming the clothing store sold drugs just because Lis promised a treat there that wasn't food, if it was just a couple of lines then it would pass as a little "misunderstanding" joke but it went on WAY too long
then the entire opening to the interrogation with so many slaps and over the top aggression, the first one as a nervous mistake was like "wtf lol" kinda thing but then it kept happening and then the fact both mc and claire let each other's names slip despite claire specifically saying not to use each other's names as the only rule to follow seemed like way too much of a dumb mistake for either of them especially claire (I'd also personally say the kelly workout joke dragged on a little, and was out of place cause the scene was finally taking itself a little seriously as a seperate critique)
a slip up doesn't make a character stupid it's continuing to make the same mistake that makes them appear dumb, which is why it's mostly the length of the jokes that messes it up imo, he should've understood sooner with the clothing store, and he should've calmed down after the first slap, as for the name thing I can accept it as getting too relaxed after getting their answers, but I feel like claire atleast should have realised the moment she slipped or something rather than mc having to dream remember it, considering that it seems like she's supposed to be some experienced badass and all
handwaving bad writing just cause it contains porn is lazy, plus if I just wanted porn I'd look up porn not a story driven game that includes porn
those 2 scenes just really bothered me because they weren't funny, went on for way too long, and contradicted the main character is supposed to be smart and the game constantly reminds you he's smarter fir being a lune but he's always an idiot (I'm not a fan of "smart" characters in general cause it's normally just obvious shit that everyone else doesn't realise to stroke the ego of a fictional character)
I'm also tired of the constant interruptions as an ongoing gag since I don't find it funny, it interrupts the flow of the story, and isn't used tactfully. it's clearly just the writer doing whatever they think is funny but atleast it isn't contradicting the story
it also bothers me that everyone just talks casually in public about things that are supposed to be closely guarded secrets, like there is a secret organisation out to kill all lunes that you're trying to hide from but you constantly talk about how you're a lune just walking the street and in restaurants, like tf are you trying to get yourself killed? aren't you supposed to be smart? isn't claire some experienced badass who should know better?
those things are easily ignorable, the two things I complained about originally were bad jokes that felt completely out of place and lasted for way too long to even work as jokes, I should have worded it less aggressively in my first comment but at the time I tabbed out after the interrogation to complain cause this character I'm constantly told is supposed to be smart is doing the dumbest shit I've ever seen, and had it continued like that I would have dropped it, cause again if I just wanted porn I'd look at porn but I come to vns for something with an actual story, and I'm 99% sure people don't make like this just to be porn because that's a whole lot of effort for no reason, sure some are just porn but I don't really get those cause as the creator it's alot more effort than making a comic or video and as a player it's way to involved for fap material so just handwaving it as porn when they're clearly trying for something more than that is a bit inconsiderate to the creator
god it's easy to ramble, that's a lot of words there so...
tl;dr don't be an ass to the creator by saying it's just porn cause the dude is clearly trying to put a good story in there I just feel like they need to learn how to use humour better, cause it was killing the story for me and it's definitely better later in the game
I kind of see where CC is coming from, but I don't think I'm as angry about it. The clothing store thing didn't make sense to me either. But the interrogation I thought was fine. They address saying each other's names in the story. And the slapping kind of made sense just because smart or not, MC is still a kid who learned who he is literally 3 days before, and doesn't have experience yet how to handle such things. It was also addressed in the story that he behaved that way because he saw a lawyer character in a game he and Emi had in common.
I’m glad to see I wasn’t the only one. This game is really highly rated, so I had high hopes, but the brain dead stupidity of the MC and other characters made me abandon it. And it sucks cause I actually enjoyed the game outside of that.
My dude, I played up to the latest update and I don't see how the mc is dumb. I can't tell if you're just autistic that can't get jokes or just too prideful to admit you didn't get them.
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Gave up on this one. The A bit in AVN is sorely lacking. The Claire scene in the other town, was HOT AF, and there is thus, some potential there..... but I am not interested in Rich Girl or Kelly.... and HOURS in to the game, they are the only ones I have gotten action with.
I play AVNs for the A bit, or I would I just play VNs... the A is this sometimes good.... Claire was amazing... but the scenes with Glasses Girl and Sporty Spice were... mediocre... and I still aint gotten the full Claire treatment with Blue Hair, Fake Blonde, Pinky or Ghost Girl....and they are the reason to keep playing.
I gave up. This is the first AVN in a LONG LONG time I have GIVEN UP on.
I'll give it a solid 6/10.
This game...is kind of rushed, but the story is still good tho.
But also rest assured that men and women are all a template, which is exactly the same.
Isn't this what they look like when they grow up? I believe that they are sisters. It's like playing a trumpet, haha
Hey can you give me this avn's name... I played it before and kinda forgot the name now. So, it'd be really helpful.
Thanks.
You played a good game,
Twisted Memories
Got it. Thanks.
Eternal world, eternal approval hahaha
Isn't this a bit like Daglia and Annie?
One question is, did they bump into each other's faces? Haha, brother, I think you can really make a guest appearance. It always feels like the protagonist plays a trumpet in someone else's different world.
The story of this game is still good. I like it very much, especially the girl who can communicate with the necromancer. She is very quiet and lovely. The only drawback is that she can't see clearly about sex.
I've followed the guide and it wont unlock Emily's last scene
How do you get through the interrogation, which statement do you object to?
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"I was told to show him the ropes. He’s just a newcomer"
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"They put the blindfold back on after. I was only able to remove it after the whole process, when I was already very far away from their place."
This is from his walkthroughs
Hey, so, I'm trying to transfer my saves from a xiaomi (0.8) to my new samsung (also ver. 0.8) can't quite figure it out, I need a hand :b
Thanks im advance, absolutely love the game! Been playing more than a year!
OK I am failing EVERY point in the Interrogation scene. I object to something, wrong, rollback, try the next, wrong.. repeat... over and over and over nothing works.... I have no evidence, because the MC is a little dumb... I know he is meant to be smart... but he is a little dumb... no criticism and I do not think it is a problem... but he goes off halfcocked... and I am literally STUCK.
Kind of upsetting... be nice to have a way to skip the mini-games.
No seriously... I just went back and tried everything again.
If there is some trick, or can wind up deadended, then this game is unplayable.
Sorry, I do not mean to be harsh, but this game DESPERATELY needs a skip feature for the mini-games.
That's what i'm saying. The only way to figured it out is if you read carefully, and if he lied about what he said earlier, and make a different answer thats when you accuse him.
I got through it, but I kind of, tbh, gave up on this game.
It's kinds fun.... and the story is kinda OK.... but it took forever to get the promise made with... Claire.. is it... when you walk in on her bathing... to be made good on HOURS later when you investigate the cursed town... and so far... I have had... fun.. with some random rich girl rammed in to the story, half way through, and Kelly.... but nothing with fake Blonde, Blue Hair, Pinky or Ghost Girl... and tbh, I do not play these games for the VN aspect of an AVN, but the A bit, lots of A bits.... and if I am jumping through hoops to actually get a taste of just how kinky Pinky is.... I am gonna lose interest.
In this case I have.
The puzzles in the game, should DO something. These ones do not, and seem jammed in, at the expense of any of the fun elements.
To be honest thats what i feel about this game.
Yeah. Just a shame, some good potential here. The graphics and aesthetic, the lighting, and ambience, is not as slick as many games which use this engine, like Eternum or Realm Invader, or especially really top notch stuff ... graphically speaking... like New Horizon, City Devil or MayFly.... but the story is sound and there is a lot here... BUT... the Adult content is just under cooked and not really well realised.
My position is if you are making and AVN, make it because the A bit matters and is important to your game. If you are adding Adult/Sexual Content/NSFW etc tags to your game, because YOU HAVE to, not because you WANT TO, because it critical to the game... then just cut that content, have it as shadows on a wall, suggestive imagery, or even just good old Fade To Black.
Sadly, whilst the scene with Claire was hot AF, almost all other scenes are meh, and not really necessary to the story. Claires one could argue, was, because perhaps crossing that line, and bonding that way, sealing the deal re the sexual and romantic energy, however taboo, between you, could be seen as critical to her revealing who she actually is and who she works for, and why she is on your side. All other adult scenes? Not really. At least not to the extent some other moment of bonding between the MC and his would be harem could not have sufficed as replacement. Kissing. Embraces. A FTB scene. Truth told, even Claire's scene could have been that way.
If the Adult element of your AVN is not CORE to your AVN, then just dump it and make it a VN.
If it is... DO NOT MAKE US GRIND for it, and do not make is fleeting... make it HARDCORE pornographic AF, lean in to it, make it delve deep in taboos, and fetishes, and really be glutton in how you gorge on making that content.
Otherwise, you wind up here, with people giving up on your game, despite the other great elements.
can you have a harem with all the girls?
Yup :)
Hi dev, what program did you use to create the characters?
bro i can't dowload it why g drive said reach quota
Probably because it's on a free account with a limit. Use mega
Is there a planned tags list anywhere I'm not seeing?
none of the download work. gdrive said that it is exceeded quota, and same for mega even after I waited for hours. Can you add a direct download link without external? Or please add another way to download like mediafire or something else.
idk if anyone else is having issues with the google doc one but it wont let me download and im no able to get a paid subscription o mega to download it there lol
Same. I can't download it. Mega doesn't work too after I waited for the timer. It keep adding more time.
Try this. it work for me.
Heyo mate.
Please consider getting a native English speaker to proofread your work.
There are so many grammatical and syntax mistakes that it's actually distracting.
Such a great story and characters. My only real issue is the complete incompetence of the villains which takes away from the stakes a bit. Its silly and funny, but the silly should be kept to the dreams as all dreams are ludicrous. Lets just say it was a bit of a tone shift. However the tone is set so we are here for the ride
有计划添加其他语言吗
An organization called Collective Shout has sent a petition to Mastercard, Visa, and other credit organizations to have games like these banned, and Mastercard complied, holding Itch.io and Steam hostage, forcing them to comply as well.
https://chng.it/zs6FvJMZ5p
This petition is already a hair's breadth from outsigning the Collective Shout petition. Sign it and stop this authoritarian bullshit.
https://action.aclu.org/petition/mastercard-sex-work-work-end-your-unjust-policy
This one is the ACLU taking Mastercard to court for cowtowing to these people.
I like this game. The main premise is interesting and game itself is very funny, especially many interactions with Kelly, she reminds me that guy from Firefly. The cons for me personally are too much porn logic, and not enough romance and affection. The women often just let you fuck them just like that, I prefer a more natural and romantic buildup of relationships, and I like when VNs shows characters in love showing random acts of affection towards each other like kisses, holding hands, hugging etc. and not just "yeah lets go fuck". For me, the game is 4,5/5 so far
Is English the only language available now?
I'm only making the English one. I've seen some translated versions through screenshots so I know they exist, but I'm currently not involved with their work.
Hey there, I got a question. I had the previous version installed through the itch.io launcher. But when I tried to update it the game wouldn't update. Then I look further and found out that I can only download it directly to my PC instead of through the launcher. Why was this changed?
Is this about the external links? itch.io only allows a specific file size and since the game size is getting bigger with every update, it came to a point that I should give external links now. I asked itch.io support to extend my file size limit and I already reached that too. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Yes, that what I was wondering about. Thank you very much for clarifying the situation. I'll download the latest version then. It's all right, and keep up the good work.
2 Questions.
Is impregnation/pregnancy going to be added to the game?
2. When is the next update?
In the end I really love this game and I want to see this to the end.
1. I haven't decided whether I'll add pregnancy to the game, but if it will be added, it will be near the end and will be purely optional
2. I'm still working on the new update and I can't say yet when will I finish it :)
Thanks!
is there a Chinese translation?
嘿，开发者！我感受到你对塑造角色的奉献精神。游戏中的角色个性鲜明，令人印象深刻。有一个猜谜游戏让我感觉更沉浸。我第一时间选对了，剧情合理有趣。唯一的问题是图形有点粗糙。我认为游戏音乐和情节很重要，而色情只是一种调味料。请继续维护它。唯一需要改进的可能是游戏的画面。也许在未来，我们可以改进建模并创建更精细的设计，为下一次比赛奠定基础。我期待着下一次更新！
hey fit, not sure if ur a group or a solo dev, but i see a lot of negative comments, and i just wanna say porn aside, i love the game. I love the references here n there and the weirdly funny punchlines. if nobody else is happy just know that im glad u made this. thank you :)
Hey! I'm a solo dev :) What you said means a lot :) Negative comments hurt, but I try to improve from them. I also know that my game is enjoyed by a lot more people so that keeps me going :)
This game is really amazing, I love everything about this. Keep up the amazing work!!!
When I play games like this, I always expect them to be bad at the early parts then decent/good at the later parts. This game doesn't even have a bad early part and it keeps getting good! I'm invested in the story already. The LIs are very unique to each other, which I love! Other harem games just have similar looking girls, I can see the effort in making the girls in this one. My only gripe is that some male models look dumb lol. It's still a 5 stars for me.
At the beginning, I was getting this very cheap effort vibe from the novel, with all the misspelling and weird everything, but I gotta say that the characters each came into their roles, and I ended up enjoying this quite a bit. I feel like I was watching the dev start out with a goofy project but really hone in on writing and the plot. The animations were solid, the ones we did get.
My biggest criticism is the adult scenes. They're usually pretty short and only one or two positions, and I don't think they're transitioned well. It's really abrupt when it happens and when it ends.
I plan to come back, cause I'm really into the plot now, but I would love to see a bit more polish too.
I love the game! Keep up the good work
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My fave so far is Celeste doing other personalities
I love the story very much and the unique way of telling them. I've played so many generic games that this feels somewhat refreshing.
really not a fan of emi's first time being like that, feels too impersonal/disconnected
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it being grainy and in b&w on top of that is kinda lame, especially with everyone wanting their firsts irl makes this one feel extra weird, you can also barely tell it's unlocked
So Far, I am really liking this. I am having fun with it. The story is mostly well written, and the animation and stills are really really good.
Curious if MissFit knows of or follows the works of Caribdis or Cozy Creator? I see some elements of each in this work.
I really like the way the MC is introduced into his house situation. So tired of MC eventually hooking up with his mom and sisters trope. This way is better, I think.
I love the urban fantasies and this one is working its way to being one of the greats. Thanks for sharing your story with us.
Just played the newest update. It really gets weird and interesting! I'm excited for the next one!
you need to decide if the mc is smart or completely fucking braindead.
the ping ponging back and forth between him being competent one moment and then in the next scene doing something completely retarded is way too much.
I've not finished the current version yet, but the mall and the interrogation are too dumb, and if they are just bad jokes like I assume they are they go on for too long as well, they're too jarring, and out of character from what we'd seen before them
I didn’t mean to portray him as dumb. Was there something specific he said or did that gave you that impression?
adamantly assuming the clothing store sold drugs just because Lis promised a treat there that wasn't food, if it was just a couple of lines then it would pass as a little "misunderstanding" joke but it went on WAY too long
then the entire opening to the interrogation with so many slaps and over the top aggression, the first one as a nervous mistake was like "wtf lol" kinda thing but then it kept happening and then the fact both mc and claire let each other's names slip despite claire specifically saying not to use each other's names as the only rule to follow seemed like way too much of a dumb mistake for either of them especially claire (I'd also personally say the kelly workout joke dragged on a little, and was out of place cause the scene was finally taking itself a little seriously as a seperate critique)
a slip up doesn't make a character stupid it's continuing to make the same mistake that makes them appear dumb, which is why it's mostly the length of the jokes that messes it up imo, he should've understood sooner with the clothing store, and he should've calmed down after the first slap, as for the name thing I can accept it as getting too relaxed after getting their answers, but I feel like claire atleast should have realised the moment she slipped or something rather than mc having to dream remember it, considering that it seems like she's supposed to be some experienced badass and all
I've played the game and didn't get those at all. Are you this critical in all porn games you play? That's actually insane
handwaving bad writing just cause it contains porn is lazy, plus if I just wanted porn I'd look up porn not a story driven game that includes porn
those 2 scenes just really bothered me because they weren't funny, went on for way too long, and contradicted the main character is supposed to be smart and the game constantly reminds you he's smarter fir being a lune but he's always an idiot (I'm not a fan of "smart" characters in general cause it's normally just obvious shit that everyone else doesn't realise to stroke the ego of a fictional character)
I'm also tired of the constant interruptions as an ongoing gag since I don't find it funny, it interrupts the flow of the story, and isn't used tactfully. it's clearly just the writer doing whatever they think is funny but atleast it isn't contradicting the story
it also bothers me that everyone just talks casually in public about things that are supposed to be closely guarded secrets, like there is a secret organisation out to kill all lunes that you're trying to hide from but you constantly talk about how you're a lune just walking the street and in restaurants, like tf are you trying to get yourself killed? aren't you supposed to be smart? isn't claire some experienced badass who should know better?
those things are easily ignorable, the two things I complained about originally were bad jokes that felt completely out of place and lasted for way too long to even work as jokes, I should have worded it less aggressively in my first comment but at the time I tabbed out after the interrogation to complain cause this character I'm constantly told is supposed to be smart is doing the dumbest shit I've ever seen, and had it continued like that I would have dropped it, cause again if I just wanted porn I'd look at porn but I come to vns for something with an actual story, and I'm 99% sure people don't make like this just to be porn because that's a whole lot of effort for no reason, sure some are just porn but I don't really get those cause as the creator it's alot more effort than making a comic or video and as a player it's way to involved for fap material so just handwaving it as porn when they're clearly trying for something more than that is a bit inconsiderate to the creator
god it's easy to ramble, that's a lot of words there so...
tl;dr don't be an ass to the creator by saying it's just porn cause the dude is clearly trying to put a good story in there I just feel like they need to learn how to use humour better, cause it was killing the story for me and it's definitely better later in the game
I kind of see where CC is coming from, but I don't think I'm as angry about it. The clothing store thing didn't make sense to me either. But the interrogation I thought was fine. They address saying each other's names in the story. And the slapping kind of made sense just because smart or not, MC is still a kid who learned who he is literally 3 days before, and doesn't have experience yet how to handle such things. It was also addressed in the story that he behaved that way because he saw a lawyer character in a game he and Emi had in common.
Thanks for the feedback! I'll keep them in mind. It's a continuous learning process after all 😁
While Cherry's gripe about the mall makes sense, I think they're going way overboard on the criticism, and I am often pretty critical myself.
I’m glad to see I wasn’t the only one. This game is really highly rated, so I had high hopes, but the brain dead stupidity of the MC and other characters made me abandon it. And it sucks cause I actually enjoyed the game outside of that.
My dude, I played up to the latest update and I don't see how the mc is dumb. I can't tell if you're just autistic that can't get jokes or just too prideful to admit you didn't get them.
Hey! I appreciate that you enjoyed the game, but you don't have to stand up for me or the game. It's alright, I rather not see people fight :)
thanks for the great game! i don't see any updates from discord though
I'll post release updates in discord starting this update 😅
Does game include harem?